Monday, October 31, 2011

I will be back!

Pull me, hate me
Or even shoot me down
But make sure friends
You've really knocked me dead.

For, if I can breathe...
I'll be back on stage
Fighting with every bit
Until I win your heart again!

3 comments:

  1. Till I read the last line, I thought it sounded like Kill Bill. The last line sounded way too doormat-ty (did I just coin a new word?) and depressing.

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  2. I just noticed the similarity between your poem's title and Schwarzenegger's famous dialogue in Terminator 2. Kavi Perarasu Geetha Schwarzenegger Raj. Or would you prefer Thennindia Schwarzenegger Geetha Raj?

    PS: Yup... extremely jobless and bored. :P

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  3. What would I ever do without you and your feedback, Guru! :D
    Thanks a tonne for... whateva!
    And I have to say, I do like the "Kavi Perarasu Geetha Schwarzenegger Raj" bit ;)

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