Sunday, March 28, 2010

Timepass!

Struggles are part of every man's life
They come in the form of worries or wives!
And once they are done with arguments and strifes
They know life's over, and they forgot to jive!

Miseries come to women as heirs or hubbies
The former is chubby, the latter is stubby!
Often treated as a slave, a cheap scrubby
Now no longer bubbly. She is mostly grubby!

Youngsters are blessed - for they are ignorant and mulish
They are worried of gadgets, or a spreading blemish.
For even when the world is at war and looks bleakish,
What keeps them up would be a love, to anguish.

Children find solace among friends at school
With homeworks half-done, they're obstinate as mules.
Parents are loving, so they are allowed to drool.
Even teachers look fools. Life is so cool.

Stages of life are - all different, all funny!
Some stages look dry. Some stages look sunny.
The one thing that links all - the crazy and cunning
Its no longer love. Its rather money.

8 comments:

  1. Stages of life are - all different, all funny!
    Some stages look dry. Some stages look sunny.
    The one thing that links all - the crazy and cunning
    Its no longer love. Its rather money.

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    well expressed
    thats a very good description about stages of life

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  2. hey Sorcerer,
    thnks for reading and for the comment...
    this was a poem penned for timepass... thts y the name...
    :)

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  3. Hi! geethu,

    thats a nice one, uve put thought to it,
    hmmm so if this is wat u do for timepass, wud like to read something which u write with deep thought, and i think u can....after reading this..i believe so... :)
    wishing u the best..

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  4. hey!
    sweet of u to say tht!
    tht was inspiring...
    thnk u so much...
    wishin u all the best with ur blog too
    :)

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  5. Dear Geethu,
    Good Morning!
    You have expressed the stage of life really well.
    But the thoughts depend on the moods!
    Right now life is so beautiful,
    As spring has made the buds bloom!
    Enjoying the fresh fragrant flowers,
    I have lost my way in the deep woods!:)
    Wishing you a beautiful weekend,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  6. Dear Anu,
    Thnks dr! very touching...
    n yeah! i completely agree... life is so beautiful... infact tht has been my status msg since ystrday... :)
    whn m moody, my poems reflect sadness. n i think my best lines so far, hv come whn m sad! :)
    u keep writin too gurlie..
    m followin ur blog from now!
    luv
    geethu

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  7. everyone struggle through life as they battle with stress,
    atleast me, howz born & raised at in unfashionable address.
    since I'm still here living well with daily moments,
    I guess I will live on with no regret or as punishment.

    I might have die for struggles
    some may hear me holler,
    and some may see me cry
    but for living I was born..

    Life is fine..fine as wine..
    smell it, sip it,.. you will feel the taste..

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  8. @ Yuva: I like the line "But for living, I was born...!"
    :)

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